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-'''Minecraft Mob Stories - The Enderman''' is a 2d animation created by ANIMAForce, and uploaded to [[Youtube]] on June 30th, 2012 . Although the video itself is not the screamer, it has a screamer near the end of the video.
+'''Minecraft Mob Stories - The Enderman''' is a 2d animation created by ANIMAForce, and uploaded to [[Youtube]] on June 30th, 2012 . While the video itself is not a screamer, it has a screamer near the end of the video.
-Before the screamer, the scene turn black with the text appears "WHY ARE ENDERMANS SO UNFRIENDLY?" before the screen fade back. After 4 seconds, an Enderman suddenly appears and screams loudly on the screen. the video end with an outro showcasing previous ANIMAForce's video, and an image of an Enderman.
+Before the screamer, the scene fades black, displaying the test ''"WHY ARE ENDERMANS SO UNFRIENDLY?"'' After four seconds, an Enderman suddenly appears and screams loudly, startling the viewer. The video end with an outro showcasing previous ANIMAForce's video, and an image of an Enderman.
 == Link ==
 <u>NOTE</u>: The following video contains a [[screamer]]!
 * youtube.com/watch?v=H6uMzdHhVI4