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== '''Overused Words''' == | == '''Overused Words''' == | ||
There are so many words that are overused including Other, Then, and more, to find any words that are not overused, click [https://www.wordhippo.com/what-is/another-word-for/ here] | There are so many words that are overused including Other, Then, and more, to find any words that are not overused, click [https://www.wordhippo.com/what-is/another-word-for/ here] | ||
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* Replace "if the player clicks the red button, the screen cuts to [[Zombie Girl]] appears with a loud scream" | * Replace "if the player clicks the red button, the screen cuts to [[Zombie Girl]] appears with a loud scream" | ||
** with "if the player clicks on the (suspicious-looking) red button, | ** with "if the player clicks on the (suspicious-looking) red button, will display the close-up picture of [[Zombie Girl]], accompanied with a loud scream" | ||
== '''Sexist/Genderist Language''' == | == '''Sexist/Genderist Language''' == |
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