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** with "Once <i>the player</i> reaches the third level of [[The Maze]], the walls get thin and <i>the player</i> reaches the screamer at the end..." | ** with "Once <i>the player</i> reaches the third level of [[The Maze]], the walls get thin and <i>the player</i> reaches the screamer at the end..." | ||
The exception to this one are jokes. | The exception to this one are jokes. | ||
== '''Overused Words''' == | |||
There are so many words that are overused including Other, Then, and more | |||
* Replace "if the player clicks the red button, the screen cuts to [[Zombie Girl]] appears with a loud scream" | |||
** with "if the player clicks on the (suspicious-looking) red button, it will display the close-up picture of [[Zombie Girl]], accompanied with a loud scream" | |||
== '''Sexist/Genderist Language''' == | == '''Sexist/Genderist Language''' == | ||
