Some Criticism !: new section
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Hello! this is kiwasi! I want to remind you to stop writing articles like this because it looks like if a child makes articles so maybe learn how to write articles correctly! :)
Hello! this is kiwasi! I want to remind you to stop writing articles like this because it looks like if a child makes articles so maybe learn how to write articles correctly! :)
(I'm not rude or anything) - [[User:KiwasiNelen|KiwasiNelen]] ([[User talk:KiwasiNelen|talk]])
(I'm not rude or anything) - [[User:KiwasiNelen|KiwasiNelen]] ([[User talk:KiwasiNelen|talk]])
ok i will try my best ok